A Fool Such As I

How can you love

a fool such as I

how many times

have I made you cry

I`ve been unfaithful

time and again

stayed gone for

day`s on end

But you would always`s

take me back again

I have hurt you so many times

I can`t count the times

I have let you down

But when I come back

your still around

your love has stood the test of time

But I promise I`ve made you cry

my last time I had love right here

the whole time

If you will forgive me

just one more time

I promise to leave my

cheating ways behind...

Author's Note

this is fiction don`t jump on me for cheating
but I`m sure its true for some

Reviews

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Great write up. Title was really nice. jst read it n mind started running what would it be like the poem. loved it

[icelandicblue]

I can hear a twang in those words. I agree with some others, it would make great lyrics.

[Muse]

Great lyrics. Not a big country fan, but I could become one. :)

[stars are far]

wow.. it is very amazing.. strong emotions and i love the regret portrayed here..
well done

[HeazerH]

I like that this is a different perspective. Good job!

[Ruth]

Can anyone change? Well..I believe they can and have seen it...we all have our reasons for what we do...or don't...lovely hon x

[Justin]

Takes a lot of sucking up your pride to say this. Do you have your music anywhere?

[Shaquana Adams]

True for some indeed. I agree with Angie, if only all men could be so honest and actually feel bad. Nicely penned :)

[MsJewel]

A great creative piece. I agree with the other comments, this would make a great little country song.

:) Julie

[Pryde Foltz]

A cheating heart will tell on you, a wise woman once said. I like that your character is repenting. Great piece, Ron.