Until the End

Kiss me softly

kiss me sweet

tell me I make your life complete

tell me you love me

tell me you are mine

tell me you will

until the end of time

do you think I`m special

do you think I`m fine

do you still think I`m as handsome

as you saw me for the first time

and when we make love

is it me that you still see

when you close your eyes

or do you pretend

and just tell me lies

am I still your love

are we still friends

will you love me

until the end...

Reviews

[Tiana]

I love how you can show your vulnerable side seeking the answers you so desire ... Beautifully penned!

[Dolce7788]

I think a lot of people could def relate to this!

[Pryde Foltz]

A very romantic and vulnerable piece. Ron.

[stars are far]

That was very amazing..
but i personally dont believe in the end ..because it is and end too

[maria ( rose)]

Love the ending to another wonderful and inspiring poem ..great song choice, soft & romantic adds that special touch. very good Ron!
maria

[Angie G]

" will u still love me until the end", a question that haunts us daily.. great writing as usual!!

[Barbara Gilmer]

great stuff Ron. I see a great flow here and continuity that reflects growth as a poet. well done my friend.

[Madison O'Dwyer]

Beautifully questioning - a sense of doubt that unites the world perfectly painted behind these questions. I hope the answers soothed your doubts.

[00000000000000000000000..]

Beautiful Ron and bold questions linger in a breeze:)

[Joyce S. Greene]

This is a very beautiful love song, Ron. I could hear the music in your words and your heart. Very well done!