Romeo and Juliet the final curtain

The winds of time

blow memories of you

through my mind

A sweeter love,i shall never know

as the winds of time gently blow

the smell of honeysuckle in the air

two young people in love without a care

Forever and always

your love shall be mine

if only in my mind

For I have touched your soul

and you have touched mine

and I will love you till the end of time

The essence of you shall always lay gently on my mind

two souls searching for solace

as we move through time

you have brought me from a boy to a man

and for that I will always be in your debt

and something I will never forget

but fate wasn't kind to you and me

our love could never be

so I will dream of you from time to time

and the essence of you will always be on my mind

Romeo romeo where art thou romeo

I`m in your heart and in your mind

where I will remain until the end of time...

Reviews

[Joyce S. Greene]

Very beautiful, Ron. I loved your imagery - so very, very romantic.

[wordman]

I`m glad you liked it joyce,good to see you

[Pryde Foltz]

For I have touched your soul
and you have touched mine
and I will love you till the end of time

A tremendously romantic write, wordman.

[wordman]

thank you for stopping by

[Sami Khalil]

This was stunning and very romantic...Bravo...................

[wordman]

I appreciate ou stopping by

[Sami Khalil]

Any time poet...Keep up this style...Bravo.......................

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Wow WordMan!!!!! This is powerful and romantic. I think I seen enough in this one poem to see the poet! Man you're awesome!

[wordman]

thank you very much,i appreciate your review
ron

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It was my pleasure you're a very powerful writer.

[Sue Hart]

That was absolutely gorgeous. Sniff, sniff. How sadly romantic. Love lost and remembered held close to the breast can be heart rending.

[wordman]

well sue I thank you for that review,no body ever mentions the music portion did you think it helps or not

[Sue Hart]

I'm afraid I was drawn by the music so much I showed my husband (a musician) and we shared the moment of beauty. Then I read your poem and my heart was touched by the words of equal beauty. So yes, I enjoyed the music tremendously. Want me to go back and read it together? I probably will anyway, I often reread those that touch my soul.

[wordman]

I`m just convinced that music especially without the words does a lot for a poem
and the background in which it is written this is why I like starlite café.on the poem without you I used a background scheme more than music

[Sue Hart]

I get it. Some people actually write with music as their muse. I have a weird brain. I like it library quiet so that the words are the music that reach me.

[wordman]

no I mean the music and the poem plays off each other they both put you there in the poem
and the backgrounds can have the same effect if you write a love poem on top of a rose background and play a love song with the poem as you read it brings an entirely different meaning to the poem and to the reader

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is truly hauntingly beautiful Ron.Bittersweet musings of past love :)

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[MsJewel]

Bittersweet and beautiful - you have captured this classic tale beautifully in your poetry.

:) Julie

[wordman]

thanks Julie it seems your my only fan today