Romeo and Juliet the final curtain

The winds of time

blow memories of you

through my mind

A sweeter love,i shall never know

as the winds of time gently blow

the smell of honeysuckle in the air

two young people in love without a care

Forever and always

your love shall be mine

if only in my mind

For I have touched your soul

and you have touched mine

and I will love you till the end of time

The essence of you shall always lay gently on my mind

two souls searching for solace

as we move through time

you have brought me from a boy to a man

and for that I will always be in your debt

and something I will never forget

but fate wasn't kind to you and me

our love could never be

so I will dream of you from time to time

and the essence of you will always be on my mind

Romeo romeo where art thou romeo

I`m in your heart and in your mind

where I will remain until the end of time...

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

We always dream of the one who got away, don't we? Who knows if you could have had a lifetime romance with her...maybe not, but you will always wonder. Your words flow easily in this one....romantic bittersweetness. Lydi**

[wordman]

yes I wonder

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Almost reads like a song...in verse...the way your words glide --- as a reader puts this into motion for me...yet the starter does reel one to go farther --- from there this just keeps giving and takes the testimony to the end...

[wordman]

thanks for the visit

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...

[Matching Socks]

So beautifully written. I think it beautifully expresses that moment we realize and understand that it's ok to let go. We've been all we can be (together), grown all we can grow (together), but we need to move on (apart).

[wordman]

thanks for reading but the irony of this is that they didn't want to separate but through their standards in life was forced too like princess diane and dodi she was killed to prevent a marriage that didn't set right with the crown

[Matching Socks]

Yeah, sad but you come to peace with those things eventually.
That's the beauty of words I guess.
The can mean one thing to you, and another to me. Beautiful, and I disagree with your bio. You're a good writer.

[wordman]

I have never really thought about it if I`m not the king then I`ll be happy as a gesture

[Matching Socks]

Gesture? Lol, nicely done.

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Again thank you for entering this poem in my little competition.
Please understand that I cannot comment now as this would be unfair to other entries.
I shall return after the contest ends.
Very best regards.
Clive.

[Mira ThePoetess]

I loved it. Your words touched me along with the music .. creating a stage for your poem where I could see the loving couple desperately suspended in a moment of time .... where hearts can only speak the truth ....
Thank you .... I loved it.

[wordman]

and I thank you for stopping by
ron

[Mira ThePoetess]

You're welcome Ron .. it's a pleasure

[Frieda P]

Gorgeous and tragic all in the same breath...I adore 'the essence of you will always be on my mind' such a romantic sentiment...just a luverly read indeed. Loved the music too...

[wordman]

thank you frieda for reading I guess I`m a romantic at heart

[Frieda P]

Was my pleasure wordman, not such a bad thing to be eh?

[wordman]

you can call me ron or wordman or s**t head lol

[Frieda P]

Haha I don't know you well enough to call you shytehead, yet...... ;-)

[wordman]

you was probally thinking it!!

[maria ( rose)]

This is just Beautiful! plain and simple.

[wordman]

thank you maria for reading

[maria ( rose)]

your very welcome!
in the library it went, Your one of my favorite writers. thanks for sharing this great piece.

[wordman]

I really appreciate your comments

[maria ( rose)]

anytime:) I'm listening to Unchained Melody..lol .. amazing song so inspiring!

[wordman]

it was a number one hit for several months sold a few million copies

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is really wonderful. :]

[wordman]

thanks for reading ,haven't seen you in a while

[Brittany Zedalis]

Yeah, I was lingering on here for a couple of weeks but not really posting. Had almost 200 RR's when I came back. Haha. I've been busy with college.

[wordman]

dam I thought 10 or 12 was bad need to know how to make the video smaller and come on by it`s self can you help me out with that

[Brittany Zedalis]

Yeah, I'll message you.

[A. Amos]

Ride on your love train, enjoying unchained melody on pan flute; while reading your words and like always lost in your beautiful world of romance. Respect bro as you truly are master of romance, my advise for your wife she need to hide you somewhere otherwise ladies of the world will follow you like mice listen words of your romantic pan flute:)

[wordman]

lol got to get over there and read some more of your books when I have a few min

[A. Amos]

Glad you enjoyed my review and you're welcome, I always consider my self as a top romantic guy but guess need to take some classes from you:)

[Ruth]

Truly stunning...the lingering pangs of want and need, not to be given. This is so tragically emotive. Beautiful! x

[wordman]

thanks again poppy I appreciate your comments

[Ruth]

My pleasure x