My Last Sunset

4 th place in the porerful story contest

Author's Note

Reviews

[Joyce S. Greene]

Hope this is just your muse talking, Ron. I'd hate to think of your leaving us so soon. This is a breathtakingly lovely piece. Your beautiful poem is complemented very well by your beautiful presentation. Great job!

[wordman]

thank you joyce,hope you feel better soon

[Rachelle]

Touching and lovely write......

[wordman]

thank you for stopping by and leaving a comment
Ron

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a touching write, Ron. A comfort to those who have lost a loved one. The presentation is stunning. Lydi**

[wordman]

thank you lydi just trying out new stuff

[Ruth]

Oh, this is touching...carrying on the self through the beauty of nature...really emotively beautiful x

[wordman]

thanks for dropping by poppy

[MsJewel]

This is lovely...absolutely stunning.

:) Julie

[wordman]

thank you Julie for the visit

[wordman]

[Sue Hart]

Okay, I might be slow, but I caught on. This poem is the way I like to look at death. It comes to all, none escape, and it's a door that leads to much more. Yours is that sunset. So beautiful, Ron. I love it too. Now to the next one.

[wordman]

well sue for now it`s only a thought not ready for that trip yet
I get into moods and write about it but reincarnation may be a possibility

[Sue Hart]

Trust me, I'm not sold on reincarnation. I like the topic for it makes a good fiction story, especially after the research it took for those books. But who's to say that God can't do what he wants? "Seriously!"

[wordman]

the bible does not say anything about it the body goes back to dirt from where it came and the spirit goes back to god from where it came no body in heaven until the judgement I was raised Baptist and always dismissed this stuff but you get older and wiser and learn to read on your own
I read all the lost books I study edgar Cayce it is a real possibility but don`t matter to a hill of beans

[Sue Hart]

My books began with a machine called BENA that could take your memory back to past lives. Thus Mystical Journey series was born. Pure Sci-fi with a mix of Romance and intrigue. I've had a blast writing such fiction.

[wordman]

i glanced at it a few minutes ago not sure i could sit still long enough to write a book but i do like short stories

[Sue Hart]

See there? I have tried my hand at short stories and failed. I'm too long winded. I get carried away and before long it's already a chapter. Ha. Probably because I read Novels like a junkie. Got to have my fix. Now I read those novels on line. It's cheaper. LOL

[wordman]

well fter 4 stanzas of a poem i get tired love short stories not sure i could write one
one of my friends writes short stories all the time but his is actually life exp.

[Sue Hart]

I would think that it would make for a better poem/short story. I've been married for a lifetime and that's my love life. That and books. te=hee

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

I think this is a lovely and succinct poem, perfectly positioned over a lovely backdrop. I hope this is mere poetic license, and not a statement of reality.

One slight correction needs to be made: "for the angels has gathered at my door" should be "for the angels have gathered at my door."

Be well.

[wordman]

thank you for reading