Remember When

Remember When

A Poem by wordman
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Do you remember me baby!

do I ever cross your mind

does your mind ever wander back

to that place in time

 

They say a hot romance

burns out fast

ahh but what a love while it lasts

a couple years pass not too long

but a lifetime of memories to look back on

 

I dream of you from time to time

and the sweet memories of you

that echo in my mind

 

I know I could have made it real

true love for you is what I could feel

I just couldn't connect the dots

 

Too many wrongs

too many rights

too many feelings for me to fight

you bought linen with my last name

and when we made love

it drove me insane

 

So please forgive me

if you will

but I just couldn't make marriage

part of the deal

 

But you will always have a place

pressed in the memories of my mind

as I dream of you

from time to time...

© 2017 wordman


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This must have been a song from your past, too, Ron. A very different song from the one you usually sing but very nicely done. Good job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautiful memories to cherish!

:) Julie

Posted 11 Years Ago


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This sounded like a wonderful song ...Good job , sir...:)..........

Posted 11 Years Ago


 wordman

11 Years Ago

thank you for reading,never thought of it as a song but the interpation is always with the reader
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

That is true...You are welcome...:)...............
Ahh a sad poem at the end Ron, but your words are a joy to read. Sorry I haven't been on here a lot this past couple of weeks!

Posted 11 Years Ago


 wordman

11 Years Ago

well I`m glad to see you back,and thanks
romantic poem much enjoyed

Posted 11 Years Ago


 wordman

11 Years Ago

thank you for reading

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Added on October 13, 2013
Last Updated on February 19, 2017
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 wordman
wordman

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