Remember When

Do you remember me baby!

do I ever cross your mind

does your mind ever wander back

to that place in time

 

They say a hot romance

burns out fast

ahh but what a love while it lasts

a couple years pass not too long

but a lifetime of memories to look back on

 

I dream of you from time to time

and the sweet memories of you

that echo in my mind

 

I know I could have made it real

true love for you is what I could feel

I just couldn't connect the dots

 

Too many wrongs

too many rights

too many feelings for me to fight

you bought linen with my last name

and when we made love

it drove me insane

 

So please forgive me

if you will

but I just couldn't make marriage

part of the deal

 

But you will always have a place

pressed in the memories of my mind

as I dream of you

from time to time...

Reviews

[Tiana]

Beautifully written. Straight from your heart ... Great song choice too ...

[wordman]

thank you,i appreciate your visit

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Wow this was Stunning so much love and romance
Just Gorgeous!




But you will always have a place

pressed in the memories of my mind

as I dream of you

from time to time...




Thank you for this Stunning piece
and for stopping by my page.



I just had a ice pack on my wrist
it isn't hurting a lot but I am being safe and
careful so I am resting it tonight.



God bless. Benita

[wordman]

thank you,so who did you hit !!

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Funny I didn't hit anyone LOL... you're welcome. I just over used my wrist and hurt the muscles.

[Sami Khalil]

"I dream of you from time to time
and the sweet memories of you
that echo in my mind"

[wordman]

thank you sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....

[Linda alexander]

Poet expressed the feelings so genuine and most beautiful way, I bet there are lots of hearts saying this poem in one way or another way, I can read in between the lines saying the best wishes for the other person along with apology, This all happens because man supposes but God or fate proposes or decides, really loved it

[wordman]

i`m glad you enjoyed it,thank you

[Linda alexander]

You very welcome, take care, happy holidays

[Pryde Foltz]

So please forgive me
if you will
but I just couldn't make marriage
part of the deal

But you will always have a place
pressed in the memories of my mind
as I dream of you
from time to time…

It does indeed capture the real life heartbreak and winsome of a great country ballade. Awsome.

[wordman]

thanks for the visit pryde

[Sue Hart]

I liked your poem. It flowed beautifully and made you remember when.

[wordman]

thank you for stopping by

[aditibaks]

Beautiful lines. A very touching poem.

[wordman]

thank you for dropping by come back again lol Ron