Rose Garden

Before the day
breaks through the night
the dew falls and glistens
in the light.

It waters the roses
in my garden so rare
only beauty will you find in there

It`s a special place
down in my soul
where no one else can ever go

Only I can trod that ground
it`s a place
no one else ever found...

Author's Note

you know when I wrote this piece I really didn't know what it was about
after reading comments from all sites I really thought about it and this is what I discovered.the rose garden is a metaphor of course it is my inner soul life waters my soul
but the person on the outside and the one on the inside are totally differen`t I don`t show the inside openly and people really don`t know me...

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

A sublime piece, Ron. Some really beautiful lines throughout:)

[wordman]

thank you pryde for stopping by always welcome

[Angie G]

Beautiful Words, beautitiful soul.

[wordman]

thank you angie for reading

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is very beautiful.Your inner sanctum sounds lovely:)

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:)

[MsJewel]

This is so beautifully soft and romantic Ron. You have a beautiful heart and it shines in every word.
I'm so glad I found this one this evening. It is lovely
:) Julie

[wordman]

I`m glad you topped by,it`s always my pleasure

[Alene Parr]

Beautiful, but a bit haunting as well. Maybe a bit of regret that no one was ever allowed into that special place? Or maybe a celebration of that fact. Either way, lovely piece.

[wordman]

well I thank you for reading

[zainul]

And I found the lovely divine place through your amazing poem.
Great write,Ron.

[wordman]

you are too kind thank you

[Sami Khalil]

One of your best I think...Bravo.................

[wordman]

I kinda always liked this one too thanks for taking the time

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..............

[Joyce S. Greene]

I see this place as a refuge deep within your heart, Ron, where you can go to enjoy the peace and solace offered to you by your beautiful thoughts and memories. This is a very lovely poem and I felt the beauty of your garden in my heart. Write on and if I don't get to yours, just send me a message and I'll read your poem as soon as I can. There are just so many read requests and so little time . . .

[wordman]

every body can see right through me,they know me more than I know my self
and I was just jousting you a little I know you will see a new poem sooner or later had 27 read requests last Monday was off over the week end you certainly have a good eye for interpation joyce Ron