A Season in the Sun

You were like a rainbow

down in my soul

as we shared our feelings

and watched our love grow

 

And I wonder

I wonder why you chose me

and I wonder

I wonder what you saw in me

 

You was the most beautiful woman

I have ever met

you,i will never forget

 

and I wonder

I wonder what your dreaming of tonight

and I wonder if you ever think back

think back on that rainy night

 

When we made love

for the first time

the words you spoke

the way you looked

I will always remember

 

And when I think back

I will never be sad

I will always cherish

the season in the sun

that we had...

Reviews

[Sue Hart]

That was so inspirational. It was very touching reaching deep into the heart and soul urging us to remember and hold dear that moment in time. Excellent work.

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[Helen Woodward]

Yes, a season in the sun with someone you love is well worth remembering.
Thank you for helping me to remember mine.

Cheers :)
Helen...

[wordman]

thank you again and you are most welcome
Ron

[Joyce S. Greene]

What wonderful memories you have shared with us, Ron. I enjoyed reading your poem, it was obviously written with a lot of love.

[wordman]

thank you for taking the time to read my humble poem

[Ruth]

Oh, this is wonderful, so serene xx

[wordman]

thank you very much

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Lovely sentiment... We are nothing if not a culmination of our experiences, and sometimes memories make for the best tools in shaping our "now" selves. Sublime write.

[wordman]

thank you for taking the time to read
Ron

[MsJewel]

You were like a rainbow...a beautiful thought Ron. Your poem is gentle and romantic. Simply lovely my friend.

:) Julie

[wordman]

thank you for reading
Ron

[MsJewel]

You are very welcome. Your poem is lovely.

[wordwarrior]

Just beautiful Ron. This sure made me sigh.
Lovely flow and imagery throughout. Much enjoyed this!

[wordman]

thank you for reading
Ron