Will you Marry Me

https://youtu.be/IYj2hex99gY?t=2

My love

you will be with me

forever and a day

 

My love for you

will never fade away

 

You`re the most beautiful

thing to come into my life

 

You`re my inspiration

you`re the light of my life

 

you`re my every dream

you`re my dream come true

 

I want you to know my darling

just how much I love you

 

you`ve inspired my life

you have helped me grow

you`ve helped me in ways

you`ll never know

 

Your the sweetest thing

to come into my life

would you take this ring

and place it on your hand

 

Will you always be my lady

and I will always be your man

will you darling be my wife...

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is beautiful Ron and what every person wants to hear from the one they love:)

[wordman]

thank you very much

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Aethereal]

Very good! It seems that you have written a beautiful love song here. Remember that the most common mistake on WC among writers is using the possessive "your" for the contraction "you're". It's just a bad habit.

[wordman]

yeah and bad grammar but I know when I do it I just keep on lol

[wordman]

thank you for reading and the friend req

[Aethereal]

Your... Oops! I mean: You're welcome! But your welcome is welcomed.

[wordman]

good nite or night

[Aethereal]

Time for bed!

[Erik Daniel]

Pure beauty. I am at a loss for words on this one. Well done!

[wordman]

I appreciate your comment and your friendship

[M.K. Jawdat]

Sweetly done beautiful words

[wordman]

well mk I am glad you dropped by my humble home,thank you
ron

[Angie G]

Beautiful words, beautiful writing.. Always a pleasure to read your work!!

[wordman]

thank you for reading angie

[A. Amos]

Wonderful piece of writing and I'm sure many will say Yes:) always enjoyed reading your poetry my friend. Love the Pan Flute version of Unchained Melody, great combination bro

[wordman]

amos your my number one fan always enjoy the visits

[A. Amos]

That is true my friend, as there are very few writers you wait for their next venture and I have no shame to say; your new craft I always wait;)

[wordman]

I have a few you haven't read

[A. Amos]

you can send me RR

[Im His Daughter]

awwwwwwwwwwwwww

[wordman]

she said no I wasn't romantic enough

[Dye]

What a sweet poem. A romantic read sure to charm a lady, very nice.

[wordman]

thank you for stopping by to read

[wordwarrior]

Oh how very beautiful Ron. Your words are soft, tender and very heartfelt. Beautiful thoughts here

[wordman]

thank you for reading