Touch you Touch me

I have touched your soul

and you have touched mine

and we will be together forever

if only in our minds

 

Two souls meeting in the night

two wrongs don't make a right

but our hearts locked

and our souls entwined

 

We danced in the stars

solace we can find

so forever we shall always be

because i touched you

and you touched me...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Blood Ink Diary]

Such a breath-taking poem enhanced with Lionel's backgroud music !
The imagery and usage of metaphors is aptly balanced - there is a smooth flow right till the end of the verse.
Thank you for adding (more) stars in the twilight, wordman ! cheers

[wordman]

I guess i am a romantic it just comes out and I thank you for stopping by to read now you know where my comment came from lol ron

[Blood Ink Diary]

Ah, yes -- now I fathom your comment at my space ! Lol. stay blessed.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. You said it all in the short poem. We must give and take to make love work. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[wordman]

thanks for stopping by you are always welcome Ron

[Im His Daughter]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sorry its all I can say... maybe this too... no no other words can come.. breathtaking perhaps but thats it!! lol

[wordman]

you can tell I am a hopeless romantic thank you again

[Im His Daughter]

which is hard to find... You're wonderful!

[wordman]

just another poet looking for that number one hit but I hope I am to humble to see it if it came

[wordwarrior]

Just beautiful. A meeting of minds and souls. Now that's true love, deep and abiding.
Lovely writing Ron.
Spill ink and dance!

[wordman]

you are too sweet thanks

[Joyce S. Greene]

When two souls become one, they can indeed find solace in each other's arms and minds. It sounds like you are doing all right and that makes me smile. Write on!

[wordman]

thank you for reading and your comment i am a good observer of life and
then I try to paint a picture of what I see I especially enjoy love and the pain of it
and the good side of it