In the Still of the Night

In the still of the night

all matters of the heart

come to light

 

I smell the perfume

in your hair

as I lie here beside you

waiting for your caress

 

like a child

in a candy store

the flickering fire light

shows your shadow as a silhouette

my mouth watering my hands wet

 

and then you touch me

I explode inside my feelings

for you I could never hide

 

do you know how much

I love you

do you know how you make me feel

did you know I would die for you

if it was your will

 

yes baby! that's how I feel

after all these years

this is how you make me feel

 

just by the touch of your hand

my heart you still command...

Reviews

[sette]

the romantic side of wordman is clearly expressed in this poem amazing description and use of words.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit,,be back on in about 2 weeks

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"In the Still of the Night"
wordman,
The title is fitting for its quietness gives a realm to be filled with honesty.
The poem is like a story which gives itself its own life.
The life is of a relationship which, with time has matured and become
comfortable with itself. The two loved ones within it's blessed cloak
know this truth and simply can bask in its light. She the receiver of
her knight in shining armor's love. Loved it!
Blessings,
Kathy

[wordman]

you give great reviews,thank you for the visit,it was a leasure,,i will be off line for a cpl weeks after tonight ,moving

[Kathy Van Kurin]

I wish you good things in your future home. As always it is nice to chat and looking forward to hearing from you. Good luck!
Kathy

[wordman]

thank you,i hope so to

[Fran Marie]

Awhh. This is so sweetly written ...a tender and endearing declarations of love

Nice work..

[wordman]

thank`s fran maybe i`ll win a contest lol

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Very sweet....a loyal love....a true love.....and a love that lasts. Lovely pen.

[wordman]

thank you very much

[fattycbreezy52]

Teaches a lot more about the touch and it's impact on another person.Very romantic.Loved it:)

[wordman]

sorry i missed this,this is when the troll was leaving comments
thank you

[silent poet]

The best kind of love, the one ( That lasts).. very beautiful wordman :)

[wordman]

thank you camille,the only kind

[B]

A beautiful poem
Keep it up Wordman
Very Romantic

[wordman]

thank you nisreenaa,i appreciate your visit

[Valentine]

How did I miss this write of yours. very romantic, it reminds me of the time I got to spend with my Honey. Very sweet. Valentine

[wordman]

thank you for your visit,glad you liked it and glad you spent some time with your love