Words

words

 

sweet words of love

lets you see into my soul

 

let`s you see

the love that I hold

 

let`s you feel

my warm embrace

 

my words

take you to

a special place

 

our souls embraced

our hearts entwined

 

the love we feel is real

if only in our minds

 

for I have touched your soul

and you have touched mine...

Reviews

[RomaJ]

It's amazing how words have an affect on one's emotions. Especially on the reader of such a lovely and romantic poem. Very sweet, wordman. You always have a way with words.

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[Valentine]

Some want to hear the words, others want positive actions. Valentine

[wordman]

yeah,thats what I said Kathie,thanks lol

[Matching Socks]

Aww, you do this mushy stuff so well. :)
You've got us swooning...

[wordman]

thanks for the visit

[Pryde Foltz]

the love we feel is real
if only in our minds

for I have touched your soul
and you have touched mine..

Beautiful, Ron:)

[wordman]

thank you,pryde

[Madison O'Dwyer]

I like the conclusion, it's a neatly and charmingly packaged poem.
Thanks for sharing!

[wordman]

thanks for reading

[Frieda P]

Awh, I love your mushy side ron....hearts entwined and souls embrace, what could be better?

[wordman]

what about a glass of sweet tea with lemon lol thanks

[Frieda P]

That sounds good too thanks. :)

[Aethereal]

What I need is a listing of all those Sweet Words of Love that all the poets on here are always writing about I read so much about them, but I never see any of them within the poems themselves. C-mon, list a few cuz I'm curious to know what they are. Also, when you use the word soul do you mean the mind? Are lovers mind melding with each other? How’s that done? These lovers have unusual alien powers. None-the-less your poem was a simple expression about two people who cause each other to be in a good mood. Mood poetry?

[wordman]

your inner being the real you with out the body your mind,spirit,inner being
thanks for reading

[Aethereal]

Then you mean the programming of the brain as apposed to the physical brain itself. Since we don't know the full extent of reality, then you're guessing that this programming is somehow stored inside another dimensions that we are not yet aware of. Who knows, but it makes your poem work.

[wordman]

that's as good of a summation as I can see and it works as you said

[MsJewel]

Simply beautiful Ron!

:) Julie

[wordman]

thank you julie