Rose Petals

a wedding poem

Rose petals of love

fall at your feet

a sweet begining

we will soon meet

 

you say you will

I say I do

we start our lives

together a new

 

you pledge your love

and I`ll pledge mine

and our love will

begin the test of time

 

your gown of blue

your hair of gold

just the sight of you

warms my soul

 

after today

our hearts will beat as one

I pledge my life

I pledge my love

and I pray

for guidance from above...

 

Reviews

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Deep buddy I love it:) very well said:)

[wordman]

I appreciate the read

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It was my pleasure Ron

[Im His Daughter]

encore, encore, you are awesome!!

[wordman]

a lady on another poetry site wanted a poem for her daughters wedding she more or less wanted one stanza for the napkins thanks for reading

[Joyce S. Greene]

Very beautifully written song of your love for your wife - who is very lucky to have found you. Does she write, too?

[wordman]

thank you joyce i don't know where this stuff comes from

[Joyce S. Greene]

I do, your heart which seems to be three sizes too big! But then a heart can never be too big. Yours is just the right size.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Dedication pieces always bring out the reality in our words... and this does that... you can express the true moment... nothing is overtly missed... since the moment takes you and the words come out naturally...

[wordman]

thank you glen for your comment and taking the time to read

[Lydia Shutter]

Straight from your heart to hers, Ron. So very beautiful. Something that could easily be read as wedding vows! Lydi**

[Ruth]

Lovely! Beautiful and heartfelt x

[Trevor Jay Bloodworth]

Flowed nicely and was well written. I had to do a double take on the fourth stanza when you changed up the rhyme scheme. Haha. Poems on love are some of my favorite, mostly because its a central theme to poetry.

[wordman]

thank you for reading I always change up I don't know if its a style or just my ignorance
or lack of poetry knowledge but it seems to work

[jvava]

Something about this poem is beautiful.
I like your religious interpretation of marriage; too often people describe marriage as if it's nothing important.
It's a commitment in front of God - of course it's important!
All in all, this a lovely poem about the commitment of marriage, and the faith of two people in love that God will sustain their relationship.
I like it! Keep up the good work!

[wordman]

thank you for reading and yes it is spiritual all marriages should be