Rose Petals

Rose Petals

A Poem by wordman
"

a wedding poem

"

Rose petals of love

fall at your feet

a sweet begining

we will soon meet

 

you say you will

I say I do

we start our lives

together a new

 

you pledge your love

and I`ll pledge mine

and our love will

begin the test of time

 

your gown of blue

your hair of gold

just the sight of you

warms my soul

 

after today

our hearts will beat as one

I pledge my life

I pledge my love

and I pray

for guidance from above...

 

© 2016 wordman


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A beautiful unchained melody in your romantic poetry ron, you had me at that first stanza, luverly!

together 'anew'

Posted 10 Years Ago


 wordman

10 Years Ago

thank you much I was just on your page reading the colab
You have touched my heart with this sweet and romantic poem Ron. Absolutely stunning!

:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


 wordman

10 Years Ago

thank you julie
MsJewel

10 Years Ago

My pleasure. Your poem is lovely.
Well man this was a beautiful write... A powering tale of love... It's truly amazing how that special someone can make you really feel... Great job

Posted 10 Years Ago


 wordman

10 Years Ago

thanks for the visit stevo
This is a beautiful relationship poem: I was inspired to write you first verse in another way which you may keep as your own:

Rosettes

Pretty rosettes fall
over deep blue skies
as they lift the pall
from my lover‘s eyes.


Posted 10 Years Ago


Aethereal

10 Years Ago

I'm not upset! Then I'll continue to write tiny gift response poems for you to keep as your own. The.. read more
 wordman

10 Years Ago

your tiny gift response is welcome I don`t know one type from another lol
Aethereal

10 Years Ago

You're welcome! I enjoy using meter and exact rhyme to produced a sing-song poem whereby I only us.. read more
your gown of blue
your hair of gold
just the sight of you
warms my soul

You are one romantic cat, wordman.

Posted 10 Years Ago


 wordman

10 Years Ago

thank you pryde yes and a rock star
Pryde Foltz

10 Years Ago

a romantic rockstar cat
A beautiful expression of your love. Thank you for sharing:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


 wordman

10 Years Ago

thank you for stopping by
So beautiful poem really good

Posted 10 Years Ago


 wordman

10 Years Ago

i thank you for reading
Very pretty. I like it. nice job
Kasey

Posted 10 Years Ago


 wordman

10 Years Ago

well kasey I thank you for dropping by and leaving a heart print
Wonderful rhyme and poem.... can be turned into a song ...
Ahena :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


 wordman

10 Years Ago

thank yu for reading and the friend req go ahead make me a song
This is truly beautiful.It sounds like wedding vows :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


 wordman

10 Years Ago

well it is and thanks for the read
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome Ron :)

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Added on July 29, 2013
Last Updated on October 20, 2016

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 wordman
wordman

hixson, TN



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