Rose Petals

Rose Petals

A Poem by wordman
"

a wedding poem

"

Rose petals of love

fall at your feet

a sweet begining

we will soon meet

 

you say you will

I say I do

we start our lives

together a new

 

you pledge your love

and I`ll pledge mine

and our love will

begin the test of time

 

your gown of blue

your hair of gold

just the sight of you

warms my soul

 

after today

our hearts will beat as one

I pledge my life

I pledge my love

and I pray

for guidance from above...

 

© 2016 wordman


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alf
Hi wordman. Another great write. This one perhaps a tad terse for me, I like romance sof and sweet, but the expression of your love is strong and that carries the poem beautifully. Loved it, alf

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

this too is a older write,it was actually a contest for a ladie`s daughter that was getting married,.. read more
alf

9 Years Ago

I did like the wording and the poem, just that I thought it a little abrupt, but the explanation tel.. read more
Beauty, love and romance so beautifully intertwined ... beautifully written, Ron ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

hey tiana `thanks for your visit I wrote this one way back when lol
Tiana

9 Years Ago

Just as beautiful now as it was way back then :) Always a pleasure to visit you :)
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B.J
Very intimate, but bought a smile to my face

Posted 10 Years Ago


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 wordman

10 Years Ago

glad you liked it, thanks for the visit
 wordman

10 Years Ago

actually a lady from starlite café wanted something to print on the napkins at her daughters weddin.. read more
B.J

10 Years Ago

Wonderful, congratulations....A wonderful tribute to your talent
Romantic and to the bone...:).............

Posted 10 Years Ago


 wordman

10 Years Ago

thank you for the visit
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome:).........
You are the eternal romantic heart good for you

Posted 10 Years Ago


 wordman

10 Years Ago

thanks for the visit tate always welcome
Tate Morgan

10 Years Ago

you are welcoem friend
Wooooooooo, this gorgeous, dudeee! Love it all, unchained melody is my favourite song ever!!! You hit the bullseye dude.

Posted 10 Years Ago


 wordman

10 Years Ago

thank you for visiting my humble home two names lol
s y e

10 Years Ago

Lol, aren't you funny.
I'm gonna call you Master Ron the master of romance..
This is pure magic to a woman's heart these words that you write are astonishing
just a delight to read and you chose the best music for this poem for sure I absolutely love it.. whoa!! awesome job

Posted 10 Years Ago


 wordman

10 Years Ago

you know I thank you ,your sounding like my friend a amos master of romance I wish I was I wish I co.. read more

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Added on July 29, 2013
Last Updated on October 20, 2016

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wordman

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just ask, golden glove boxer years ago,us army veteran ,a contractor is how i make my living, i am an amateur writer.. been here since june of 2013,couldn`t write then,still can`t.but who cares i .. more..

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