Rose Petals

a wedding poem

Rose petals of love

fall at your feet

a sweet begining

we will soon meet

 

you say you will

I say I do

we start our lives

together a new

 

you pledge your love

and I`ll pledge mine

and our love will

begin the test of time

 

your gown of blue

your hair of gold

just the sight of you

warms my soul

 

after today

our hearts will beat as one

I pledge my life

I pledge my love

and I pray

for guidance from above...

 

Reviews

[¿]

The poem can make the bride to be emotional much!
Her bouquet of rose and rose petals falling at feet...and the beginning starts..
Embraced with infinity wishes...great read😊

[wordman]

thank you for the visit,i appreciate it
i just re read one of yours and seen where i had allready commented,lol,i will hunt another

[¿]

Oh, you're welcome and thank you!! But I really liked this...gonna take a copy in my library😀
read moreOh, you're welcome and thank you!! But I really liked this...gonna take a copy in my library😀

[wordman]

be my guest,you might like will you marry me if u like wedding poems

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"Rose Petals"
Wordman,
Love really does make the world go round. Your poem is a simple and precious focus on this inner hope all people desire to see fulfilled. I enjoyed it very much just because of it's sweetness and tenderness. You are quite the romantic!
Blessings,
Kathy

[wordman]

thank you for the sweet review

[Kathy Van Kurin]

You are so very welcome Mr. Wordman! Keep up the great writing and sharing your thoughts. It's so nice.
Blessings in this coming Thanksgiving season.
Kathy

[wordman]

you have a great thanksgiving kathy

[AYVID N]

A poem for that most special day, full of beauty and hope. Effortless grace and rhyme....

[wordman]

thank you for the visit, a lady was looking for one stanza to put on her daughters wedding napkins,i gave her the first stanza,but then i finished it

[Valentine]

This is a lovely write. Glad I found it ..Valentine

[wordman]

well i`m glad you found it to,somebodys daughter was getting married,her mother was looking for a stanza for the napkins,the first stanza is what i gave her then later finished it to a poem

[wordman]

second place in the passion masters contest

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautiful as always.

With the Ghost theme.

Thank you for sharing.

God bless Benita

[wordman]

glad to see you girl,you remind me of my home state

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Nice always good to think of
home or memory lane. :)

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Beautiful poetry with a beautiful theme.

[wordman]

thank you,took care of the other thanks