Winds of Time

The winds of time

blowing gently through my mind

telling me things long forgot

that I had placed deep into my mind

 

the sweet sound of your voice

the gentleness of your touch

the love that you gave

that I need so much

 

I long for your kiss

your sweet touch

I miss you so much

 

do you still love me

I know that you do

cause the winds of time

is blowing on you too...

Reviews

[Aethereal]

This was a charming poem of how we bring fond moments back from the far past as if they only happened yesterday: I was inspire to rewrite your first verse in the following way which you may keep as a gift:

Recollection

Hurricanes of time
blowing through my mind
take me to sublime
memories left behind.

[wordman]

thanks for the review and that stanza would work fine putting more emphases on how much he misses her

[Aethereal]

You're welcome! It's often better to replace a general term such a "winds" with a specific term.
read moreYou're welcome! It's often better to replace a general term such a "winds" with a specific term.
The hands-of-time would be the paws-of-time, or the claws-of-time. Time claws at our hopes and dreams.

[00000000000000000000000..]

Ohhh my some soul here! I am seeing a lot in you in words songs. I got a song for you I bet you could put words to it in a hurry. Your an awesome writer Ron!

[wordman]

thank you,i`m just another writer

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Ahhh so you think anyways! You're more than that my friend. See who you are that's the greatest gift:)

[wordman]

that's what a couple of other people say,but I guess I`m humble

[0000000000000000000000000000]

better listen to the voice that lingers

[Sue Hart]

That's beautiful. The sentiment of it. The particulars of that person expressed and knowing it is returned. It brings a sigh to the heart. Keep going big guy, you are on a roll...that apparently is never ending.

[wordman]

well prepare a meal for two the lord will come and share it with you
this is his birthday

[Sue Hart]

Great sentiment. He takes walks with me everyday. I guess he could join me for dinner. :)

[Great Aunt Astri]

I like 'the winds of time' Wind can affect a lot of people at the same time . Any reason for verse three
only having three lines?

[wordman]

how many should it have,and thanks for reading

[Great Aunt Astri]

Doesn't matter, it is just that the others have 4 with rhymes. Poetry is written anyhow these days but sometimes it can be fun to do a structured poem with a pattern in the amount of syllables and rhymes. But anything goes, and yours reads very nicely.

[wordman]

I write as it should be read instead of punc, which I think takes away from the poem so I group each stanza as it should be read don't know why

[Joyce S. Greene]

Another beautiful love poem. You have a good heart.

[wordman]

yeap a push over

[Inspiring Writer]

Last stanza's great... and the words're great, totally simplicity shown from this piece about winds of the time. It was a raining outside here where i am and the cold winds're blowing outside i can feel it... fell the coldness of winds. Your this write's to the tee true as well as real too. You've known about time too i think. Great write you written and shared here in this site. you've to write more and more! Overall, i loved this write much. Your flow's great in this writing's field.
Beautiful work, great job!

[wordman]

i really loved your review,i had some malware about this time and i didn`t see it till now
i am sorry i didn`t see it sooner and comment back

[Mandi]

I love the simplicity of this.