a return to romance

just like it sounds

A return to romance

is what she said

as she kissed my lips

and laid back onto the bed

 

A sweet sensation of love

came over her face

as she held me in a warm embrace

 

it's been a long time

she said

as she pulled me down

on to the bed

 

I kissed her sweet  lips

I held her tight

as we made love

all through the night

 

I could see

the rise and fall of her breasts

as the light danced across her chest

showing all her curves I kissed them all

 

I awoke in the morning light

to find she had left

during the night

 

A red rose lying on the bed

where last night she had laid her head

a note on the night stand beside my bed

 

I love you is all it said ...

 

Reviews

[stars are far]

that was very romantic, sweet and wonderfully done, i loved the rhyme too, it was very attractive and flowing, and at the end the letter she left i was like "aww, thats cute" hehe , well yeah that was wonderful :)

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[Crystal Ellyson]

Love it!!! great description. It is truly wonderful!!!! Great job!!!

[wordman]

I appreciate your visit thanks, ron

[Pryde Foltz]

I could see
the rise and fall of her breasts
as the light danced across her chest
showing all her curves I kissed them all

Wonderful work, Ron. Particularly loved the stanza above.

[wordman]

thanks pryde for the read and comment you are always welcome

[MsJewel]

A beautiful story of romance Ron!

:) Julie

[wordman]

thanks for reading julie

[Shaquana Adams]

This is so romantic and lovely. I love it :)

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[A. Amos]

Outstanding my friend, such a romantic poetry give a vision of beautiful sensual moments in our lives...
Pure magic and love KD Lang and Roy Orbison song Crying. Simply amazing combo of words and music...

[wordman]

thank you amos

[00000000000000000000000..]

Wow so romantic other than the leaving part, But she left a rose red of all colors lay it where her head was :) Left a not all it said was I love you:) That's pretty deep:) Id like to hear about this:) sometime.

[wordman]

just another one of my fairy tales thanks for the read

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Well we all got them and nothing wrong with that Ron:)

[Joyce S. Greene]

Hopefully she returned soon, Ron. You leave that up to the reader's imagination so I am imaginging she did. Very nicely done, I always like a poem with plenty of dreaming room.

[Sami Khalil]

A very sweet love poem...I feel the romance in it...:)

[wordman]

thank you for the read I got a star finally lol

[Sami Khalil]

Thank you kindly. You are welcome...:)