Two Souls

two souls searching in the night

two wrongs dosen`t make a right

 

but your searching for solace

where there is none to find

 

your paths cross your hearts meet

your eyes are blind you enter

with in one another

 

your hearts entwine

you become as one

 

your souls make love

the solace you find

 

fate is wonderful

love is blind

Reviews

[B.J]

I believe what you have written to be true. I should post one from my treasure trove, I wrote when my head was in a whirl. Congrats on a great poem.

[wordman]

post it I will be the first to read,you are to kind thank you again

[B.J]

:)>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

[Sue Hart]

I enjoyed your poem. It's the way I see love. There's physical, then a friendship, but the love begins when the souls merge into one. Beautifully put, Ron.

[wordman]

thank you sue you are always welcome

[jacob erin-cilberto]

souls making love, rather than bodies, or in tune with the bodies.

nice concept...used to allow fate to dictate love....

in the old days...before the blind eyes saw and felt what they did.

[wordman]

thanks Jacob for the visit

[MsJewel]

Wow...Ron...your poem is lovely. I think this is my new favorite by you! Love it!

:) Julie

[wordman]

thank you julie

[wordman]

this was the first poem I posted here on wc

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A telling piece that makes one search for the romance in everything, well done.

[wordman]

Thomas thank you for the visit you are always welcome

[Pryde Foltz]

fate is wonderful
love is blind

There some truth there. Loved this romantic write with a touch of the wry:)

[wordman]

thank you pryde

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautiful touching poem of love.


I truly enjoyed this read thank you
for sharing I love romantic writes
I'm a Hopeless Romantic.

And the music goes so beautifully with the
poem it has been ages since I've listened to
Kenny G.


Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[wordman]

thank you for the visit and friend req my pleasure

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome. I've not read any of your work so want to take a look. I enjoyed reading this piece. thank you. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Frieda P]

A new twist on 'blind love',....love the fluttering of souls entwined.

[wordman]

thanks for the visit