Two Souls

two souls searching in the night

two wrongs dosen`t make a right

 

but your searching for solace

where there is none to find

 

your paths cross your hearts meet

your eyes are blind you enter

with in one another

 

your hearts entwine

you become as one

 

your souls make love

the solace you find

 

fate is wonderful

love is blind

Reviews

[MelissaAndres]

Trying to do some much needed reviewing and this was the first thing I chose to review today. Glad I did! Wonderful job. This seems so lyrical! Love it!

[wordman]

well i`m glad you stopped by to

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Love the last line of this creative piece.

[wordman]

thanks jane going to post this at poetfreak next just posted one today

[Indra Neil]

enjoyed this beautiful write! the last stanza is a perfect ending!!

[wordman]

thank you indra,my first poem on here,

[Indra Neil]

great! u r welcome!

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree wordman.
"fate is wonderful
love is blind"
Nice journey with a very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[wordman]

john ,it is a pleasure to see you my friend,thanks

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[B]

Absolutely breath taking
A story of true love

[wordman]

the first poem i posted here,thank you for your visit

[B]

Its lovely