Two Souls

two souls searching in the night

two wrongs dosen`t make a right

 

but your searching for solace

where there is none to find

 

your paths cross your hearts meet

your eyes are blind you enter

with in one another

 

your hearts entwine

you become as one

 

your souls make love

the solace you find

 

fate is wonderful

love is blind

Reviews

[Miss Sharon]

Sad yet very beautiful Ron...much like many of your works my friend. Be blessed in all you do! ~Sharon P.S. I also love everything Kenny G plays and have SO many of his albums.

[wordman]

thank you for the review

[Onlyme]

Aw, this is so bittersweet, when someone mind and heart is closed to real love. Before them. Made me want to cry.

[wordman]

if only in our minds,true love we find
thank you

[Onlyme]

I think love is what you make of it. Between the hearts and two soul. And spirits joined as one. You can find outstanding happiness and love. God I sound so soppy now.

[wordman]

impressive thoughts

[Onlyme]

Thanks, Ron, I take that as a compliment from you. As you write and feel romantic poems. Bless you kind sir. Dawn.

ps how you doing?

[wordman]

i am fine,i always feel what i write dawn,it just pours out

[Onlyme]

Well i for one. Love your poetry Ron. You have a glorious spirit about you Ron.

[wordman]

thanks dawn

[Onlyme]

my pleasure. Ron.

[Tracey~]

So true that fate is wonderful and love is blind. Sometimes people just don't have what it takes to allow love into their life.. Excellent write..

[wordman]

only true love can be shared,it must be from the soul and heart..thank you tracy

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Like this
Very special
Write some more

[wordman]

glad you like it,thank you

[Ayvid N]

Loved this beautiful poem on love, life and destiny. Indeed, soul mates have to have fate on their side, if ever they have to find one another.

[wordman]

thank you,my first poem on w/c

[Ayvid N]

Appreciated and treasured so much...

[Kathy Van Kurin]

wordman,
"Two souls" is a poem of thankfulness! Even in an imperfect world these two find strength somehow in one another. "souls searching in the night, two wrongs doesn't make a right.........searching for solace where there is none to find...hearts meet.. the solace you find." Solace is a good word and I see it used twice. It surly describes the hope we all share................Blessings, Kathy

[wordman]

thank you kathy,appreciate the visit

[Kathy Van Kurin]

You are welcome! It was nice to read your work.

[Valentine]

Doing rereads. Please get your fingers around that pen and start writing. Valentine

[wordman]

posted one yesterday but deleted it,this is just not my home any more,,the troll told barleygirl i was a thief,she spread it to nemo,they both together has spread it all over the site,being snubbed by a few of their friends,,

[Tony Jordan]

Whatever happened to Valentine/Kathy ??

[wordman]

haven`t seen her since mid march,i figured she died

[Tony Jordan]

What! oh God.
:(

[wordman]

either that or had a stroke,where she couldn`t be on line

[Tony Jordan]

Pity that...She wasnt a bad soul.

[wordman]

she loved to read and comment,

[Tony Jordan]

had a wicked sense of humour too when she was in the mood. She liked you - liked to rib you.
ah well... can't stand here all day chewing the cud WM.
God Bless mate.

[wordman]

yeah,i miss her,always wanted me to write something

[Einstein Noodle]

yes it is! :) and sometimes it really does work out that way ... a nice simple love song ...with a happy ending ..pleasant read ..yes indeed! ;)
E.

[wordman]

thank you for reading,appreciate the review

[E G TEN]

"fate is wonderful, love is blind" that's how you end a great piece of poetry Ron, simply beautiful
words, amd the great Kenny G, would be the icing on this cake. Vey cool, Thanka EG.

[wordman]

thank you my friend ! appreciate the kind words