Stale senryu

Stale senryu

A Poem by Joel M Frye
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Capturing a moment of not being in the moment....

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My thoughts are jammed on
what I did yesterday; mean-
while, the sun's come up.

© 2011 Joel M Frye


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I think your tag message contributes to the read quite nicely - to be trapped in a moment, though not THE moment, the sun won't wait as we linger on moments gone by - nice senryu!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Joel M Frye
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