haiku 5.22

haiku 5.22

A Poem by Joel M Frye

Sun sends shimmering
waves of summer's wicked heat;
salty sweat's backwash.

© 2011 Joel M Frye


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Lovely!

Posted 13 Years Ago
this warmed my soul a little x

Posted 13 Years Ago
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TJ
Too many syllables in the last line.
But ugh can I relate to this

Posted 13 Years Ago
I so get that lol.. I love it Joel..x

Posted 13 Years Ago
Beautiful! Love the alliterative S's :) And you described EXACTLY how I felt when hiking this afternoon! :) Love it :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Joel M Frye

St Petersburg, FL



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