Off balance

reach your ninja hand

into my chest; I laugh as you

fall in forever.

Reviews

[Aidz]

But would you know being it is a Ninja?

Kewl scribe

[Tate Morgan]

ah to have one underestimate you is the sweetest of gifts

[Rene Velez]

Reminds me of a game called portal...nice haiku

[Judy Ponceby]

A bit frightening....and well done. :)

[Joel M Frye]

Once the heart has been torn out, the chasm which remains is unfillable.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Wow! Very profound!