Clockwatch

s  p  r  e  a  d  i  n  g out

poured viscousmelting into

(howslowly)

                  an after-noon

Friday notpassing

your buzz hovering

gathering time from

every

        flowering

                      moment

to meld with my

langourous liquid

honey-sweet and suspended

resisting flow

and (sundrifting

                       downdown)

darkness strengthens

defines sharpening curves

and shadows leading

                             (downdown)

into your

sweet

         ohh

                honey....

Reviews

[FJ Davis]

By the time I reached the end of this poem, I felt like I should have left the room at some point. But, in my defense, you gave me no real warning.
Great use of word and spacing to create mood. Another thoroughly righteous write for our resident troubadour.

[Ruth]

Goodness! This is meltdown at its peak! So sensually powerfully! Absolutely amazing love! xx

[LA Lorena]

LOL! Just read Frank's review, and that man does make me laugh! I must say I agree with him. You did spring it at the end! A most passionate and finely crafted write!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

love the poem and the downward spiral of the words....incredible art Joel

[Lily Mae]

I agree I feel like the words melted together and had such a great flow. A beautiful write Joel :) x

[ju]

love how you've melted words into one another. " langourous liquid / honey-sweet and suspended" that's so smooth- perfect. a brilliant read for a beautiful sun-shiny day. thank you :)

[Tasha]

This was amazing, im definitely shelving this as one of my favorites. :}

whoa this is amazing, it comes off as passionate really. Most enjoyable read!