Old man, look at my life

Who writes of passing lives and passing days
writes not of visions or of blinding light,
but of despair in muted shades of grays;
perspective of an ever-dark'ning sight.

Reviews

makes me think of the old song "Old Man" This is so sad, very well written.

[Judy Ponceby]

how sad and melancholy...brilliantly captured.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

love the flow of this haunting piece Joel, a soft sad voice.......wonderful!

[ju]

enjoyed- the blinding light and dark'ning sight work well together - as words and as thoughts. a beautiful write. i like to read through muted shades of gray, of course. that's me.

[LA Lorena]

Very Neil Young-esque! This is a gorgeous, hauntingly sad poem. Well done Joel. Seems your muse is in tonight!

[Lily Mae]

I love the "muted shades of grays".. Things that make you go hmmm ;) Great write Joel..x