Untitled

my mind opens to
unlearned knowledge 
unwritten words 
unspoken voices
unrecorded lives
untold wisdom
unearthed by
unceasing 
undertow of
universal
understanding
undeterred
unless
my mind closes

Reviews

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~ wow... what a powerful message... brilliantly conveyed, monsieur jewel... i'm trying hard to keep my mind open these days... am so glad i can be here and read your words... p.s. i loved the title... :)

[Judy Ponceby]

Wonderful work Joel :) Who knew U was so versatile and wise. :)

[FJ Davis]

The cleverness of the alliteration--as well as the first and last lines--should not distract from the wisdom imparted.
Thanks, Joel.