haiku 3.29

haiku 3.29

A Poem by Joel M Frye

Gentle blades of rain
slashing overbearing heat
into cool ribbons.

© 2011 Joel M Frye


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~ this haiku is all those "cool ribbons" personified... sheer genius...

Posted 12 Years Ago


There is almost a flash of controlled violence about many things you write--very appropriate and entertaining "violence," of course. Outbursts, perhaps, of unleashed creativity.
This haiku appears to me unbelievably descriptive and exquisitely apt of metaphor.
Joel, this piece may have very long legs.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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