Freeze Frame

A moment of life too perfect

to live eternally

with words of liquid nitrogen

I will freeze it

stone-cold and statue-still

and walk around

absorbing every sculpted

curve of miraculous you

just as your eyes rolled

lips in mid-gasp

awaiting mine.

Reviews

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~ stunning beyond stunning... thou art a magician, monsieur jewel... seriously... "in mid-gasp" is unforgettable... so is the rest of this intoxicating song... amazing poetry...

[Joel M Frye]

As always, you are much too kind to me, mlle. serah. Thank you.

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~ i'm not...you are...but i'm pro-flattery... so, you're welcome... :P