Sedoka 3.25.15

open swinging door
oscillates gently in spring's
warm and moist respirations

hyacinth's odor
wafting in through the screen door
on reminiscence of you

Reviews

[Jimmy Yetts]

Lovely sentiment; masterfully developed.
I dub thee, "Sedoka Sam!"--a very great honor, as you well know.

[Joel M Frye]

Better Sedoka Sam than Sedaka Neil....thank you, Frank.

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~~ ohhh... ~~ this is absolutely exquisite, monsieur Bear... ~~ and maybe this is where i'm at in my story... hopefully...

[Jimmy Yetts]

Thou art ever a spring breeze, fair poetess.

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~~ wow... and thou art the best at showering exquisite compliments, maestro frank... thank you so much... :)