Journey to the Center of the Earth

A one-stroke senryu...took more than one stroke to get there, though.

Your sigh roars in my ear as your shudder under my hands rocks my core.

Reviews

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. wow ... an infinitely poetic earthquake, monsieur joel ... also, your knowledge of the english language startles me sometimes ... the sheer genius in this one line is incredibly inspiring ...

[Joel M Frye]

Thank you kindly, .you.
:)