Unspoken words

its still incomplete but i'm scared to complete it and ruin the essence of it...

Show me your world 

and I'll show you mine
Share your deepest secrets ,

both dark and divine.
In your wounded soul I have found 
The unspoken melancholy by which we are bound.

Seeking the pieces for the incomplete me,

I have knocked on your heart to accept me.

Reviews

[Ma'at]

this is so beautiful and i think you should try and complete it and if you do not like that then don't edit it, but i think it will turn into a magical poem :)

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Very beautiful and nicely penned.


Nice flow and easy to follow.


thank you for sharing.


Blessings. kindred poet

[Zoe]

This is really great so far. I greatly appreciate your review on my work, and hope to be helpful to you in the future. I have some pretty similar poems.

[Keith.]

It is lovely so far Angel, and you are quite right to take your time with it, I have a feeling it will be special when it is finished...Keith.