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They say Disneyland is the happiest place on earth 

Well clearly they have never been by your side 

& Norway's the most beautiful place on this planet

Obviously they have never been lost in your eyes 

& sunsets are the most beautiful sights to behold 

I pity them for they have never seen you smile 

They shout and argue as to what the most beautiful sound is 

& i just stand there laughing at them with certainty

For I already know its your sweet voice and your beautiful laugh

But i've heard your laugh & I've seen you smile 

Always out of breath, and it takes me a while 

To get a hold of myself when looking at your eyes 

They shine brighter than the sun when its on the rise

They take the light away from the brightest stars 

& your gentle touch, heals the deepest scars 

I feel as if the world disappears when I hear your voice 

All the sadness goes away & I just rejoice

You make me smile despite the Everything, I have no choice

 

Because when I look at your face, I get lost in your eyes 

And somehow I know that they're going to be my demise .

Reviews

[Karmee]

Hey now this good writing,
Love the flow and poetic feel.
awesome write

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

I love the imagery and sentiment of this poem. Beautifully done.

Yari