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as the sun came up 

on the deep dark blue 

as crickets started to jump 

and the birds all flew

as the sun started to shine 

rays of hope pierced through

touched the deepest darkest places 

only one place stayed true  

a dying man in a living room 

calm and quiet, sorrow and gloom 

sick or ill ! u would assume 

but a broken heart that's up in fumes

betrayed and played and left behind 

& no one stayed ,all the pain he had to hide 

alone and scared, no one cared 

sleepless nights, at the moon he stared 

when the lights went off it shined and glared 

But 

will he rise or will he fall 

will he walk or will he crawl 

face to the concrete or will he stand tall

Many questions left unanswered !

Reviews

[Angel]

I really like the imagery you used. I love how it's like not telling what's going to happen but it's letting the reader feel like they could answer. It's really good