So very nicely presented, sometimes we make choices that are wrong...
Sometimes it brings happiness sometimes sadness. that is why we have regrets.
enjoyed your write
A gorgeous poem. It is so true that in the heat of the moment, we lose focus and sight. Then to walk away, we lose the one chance. I have those regrets too. It is natural and you point that you point that out marvelously.
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
Yeah. Some people choose to walk away because of fear. Thank you for that constructive comment. :)
You say the poem is simple, but it is very effective. I love many of the lines, 'Reality becomes a dream.', 'Yet a thought loomed in my head'. 'I chose to look away'. So many times we look away, and then wonder what could have been. Well written.
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you.
You’re right. Some people ignore some situations that they think will just disa.. read moreThank you.
You’re right. Some people ignore some situations that they think will just disappoint them, but not knowing that it can be their chances.
6 Years Ago
Do you know, I don't remember making this review, but then it was 6 months ago! :
My favorite line is "my eyes took a snapshot". That is a really good line. Is this one of those moments when you spot someone in public and wonder "what if?" I didn't understand the statement "fell without gear"...maybe because of our cultural differences...could you explain?
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Yeah right. :) as for that line.. it's like "being caught off-guard"
Anyways, thanks you for .. read moreYeah right. :) as for that line.. it's like "being caught off-guard"
Anyways, thanks you for your comment. And so glad you liked it... :)
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