"I wrote A Poem"

A poem about my life

I wrote a poem

With boundless and free section.

Resembling the vast sky of constellation

And the sun persistently inches east and west.

Or hummingbird’s song resonates in the wilderness.

Until the river’s water turns into foam.

 

I wrote a poem

Flavoured with four seasons;

Fall withers leaves without cautions.

Winter freezes the heart later the woe

Then summer’s passion brings the frozen love to thaw

So spring brings life again to bloom.

 

I wrote a poem.

You and me vis-a-vis;

Love and hate merge in one piece.

Yet I chose to stay, even left by the groom.

 

I wrote this poem " like my living

Though sometimes it makes no sense " as my wording.

No idea of harvest time of life " nor where.

Even if my poem ends here.

Author's Note

I don't know if this make any sense..
I've just made a simple one..
I hope you'll like it.. And please comment.. thank you...
:-)

Reviews

[Shivalik Kalsotra]

very well written, you expressed the truth in a very creative way, I will say this poem is full of flavor and you talent for writing...your style is also nice...I enjoyed reading it

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This was great, was so deep full of meaning.
Was quite beautiful and moving.
Written straight from your heart, which makes for the best poetry.
Great write :)

[Rache David]

thank you cimmy...
Your comment is moving too..
i'm so glad you liked it.. :-)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Im glad u like my review.
Anytime

[Tevin Armoogum]

Really nice. I really enjoyed reading it.

[Rache David]

Thanks for the comment.. glad you enjoyed it..
:-)

[kangsora]

It does make sense, actually, it's really good! I enjoyed reading it.

[Rache David]

Thank you so much for that.. i just thought that the outome wouldn't make any sense.. :-)

[swathi]

really interesting and nice to read. and it does make a lot of sense

[Rache David]

Thanks swathi.. your comment is very much appreciated.. glad you liked it..
:-)

[swathi]

yeah.... i really enjoyed it really amazing