"The real you"

"The real you"

A Poem by Rache David
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What is a true friendship? If someone becomes a different person.

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Your sweet smile becomes bitter.

And laughs with no happiness to trigger;

“I love you” -- becomes your refrain.

Yet your heart chants no feelings -- flat and plain.

Your genuineness falters;

Behind their backs -- you mouthed a curse.

Is this your circle of friends?

Why are you on the outside of bends?

 

You’re reflection converts to distinct two.

You lost me -- the Real you.

 

© 2014 Rache David


Author's Note

Rache David
If you have real friends... Be true to them too.
Remember they're really hard to find... the real ones.
Hope you read this.. I don't think this is my best.... It's just simple as it is...:-)

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I can relate to this, having people not act like real friends.
Happens to all of us and it really sucks.
So like you said when you find the real true friends, You make sure you are a REAL friend back.
Because you don't find true friends everyday.
Great piece, really honest and inspiring.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rache David

9 Years Ago

that's really true.. honesty will always be the best ingredient in any relationship.
Thank y.. read more
cimmy wuv xxxooo

9 Years Ago

Anytime.
It truly is.
Friendship is based on mutual love, care and understanding. To be real and sincere even in turbulent times. An excellent poem and message...:).......................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rache David

10 Years Ago

I totally agree with that..
thanks for the comment:-)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).......

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Added on October 18, 2014
Last Updated on October 18, 2014
Tags: friend, curse, genuineness, reflection, real, lost, love, circle

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Rache David
Rache David

NCR, Philippines



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I'm a psychology graduate. I'm 20 years old. I love reading English novels and love to listen to classical musics. I love exploring things. Because I believe there's something more astounding and eth.. more..

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A Poem by Rache David