The Box Maker

I've been reading Flatland recently and been trying to grasp the concept of a 4th dimension. It is hard to wrap my head around. Try it :)

The beautiful creature is not asleep.

It is outside, peering into the box.

Waiting to be met and befriended, 

or caught, for its clever mischievery.

Behind the smoke, it lowers its threads.

Clues for those who feel it dance 

across their cheek when the wind blows.

Patiently. Waiting ever to be found out.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think about it :) review mine and i'll review yours. deal? ;)

Reviews

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Very well penned..!
Loved the notion behind the piece...
A believer myself, I have never imagined the Creator as this made me..
I am glad you shared this refreshing treat..

[hanselwheresgretel?]

Glad you enjoyed it! its all about looking at things from a different perspective :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

So very true!

[Marie]

I do't get the idea of a predator. From your description at the top, I do visualize a parallel world of which we sometimes get glimpses.

I do believe in a fourth dimension.

[hanselwheresgretel?]

It isn't a predator at all, but the perspective is refreshing... the box represents the 3 dimensional world we live in (and, playfully, something we should "think out of" more often). Glad to hear you views!