Whisper & Slur

Whisper & Slur

A Poem by hanselwheresgretel?
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Love is softly spoken, playful rhymes.

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I'm gonna lie down 
and dream of your lips.
Of my hands. 
Found on your hips.
Trace of my tongue. 
Taking sips.
Your body move to 
my fingertips.

Then, legs 
apart, my hand rips.
On my back
your hand grips.
Your body arches, 
my body dips.
Our bodies crashes, 
our first eclipse.

© 2015 hanselwheresgretel?


Author's Note

hanselwheresgretel?
all comments appreciated, nice ones even more so!

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Gee
Yeahhhhhh,shagging expressed politely,sweet.....

Posted 9 Years Ago


hanselwheresgretel?

9 Years Ago

haha.. I really tried to keep it classy, i think this one was really at the borderline though... Tha.. read more
Gee

9 Years Ago

You did,it's me that is lacking..
I really like this one! It has a great rhyme scheme.

Posted 9 Years Ago


hanselwheresgretel?

9 Years Ago

Thanks! sometimes people take something so fun so, so seriously.. like poetry :P

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Added on July 10, 2015
Last Updated on July 11, 2015
Tags: love, sex, body parts, whisper, slur, hanselwheresgretel?

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Petaling Jaya, Malaysia



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Malaysian Chinese 1990 5'11" guy who secretly writes too much. Needs a place to dump all the scribbles, so here i am. Working in Human Resources, studying for my masters in counseling psychology. .. more..

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