I find it ironic to think about all the things that could happen to me while i'm sleeping, just before i sleep. Because, then, i wouldn't be able to sleep anymore.
An interesting investigation. No royal roads here, but an every day kind of commute unto the residue gathered in the corners of sleep... I liked it. And the subject has loads of potential.
Okay, so the stanza I like most is the last one. Perhaps, because it´s the one that makes most sense to me. A sort of an instant connection. When I read it the first word that came to mind was - reincarnation. I´m not sure if you were thinking about the same thing when you were writing it, though. That´s the magic of poetry - a few words can have different meanings to different people. As for the last of the poem - hmm, I don´t know...It´s strange. But interesting.
J
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thanks for the review Juliana! :) to be honest, yes reincarnation did come into my mind.. but only a.. read moreThanks for the review Juliana! :) to be honest, yes reincarnation did come into my mind.. but only after the words came out and i read it out the first time...
Malaysian Chinese 1990 5'11" guy who secretly writes too much. Needs a place to dump all the scribbles, so here i am.
Working in Human Resources, studying for my masters in counseling psychology.
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