Down the Wall

 

Down the wall the blood runs red
Over the board and through the bed
Beneath the floor you hear the whispers
Of 3 men, who are drifters

 

The boy comes home and sees the sight
But doesnt scream or shake with terrible fright
His family is dead,  but nothing is said
He looks around, with a smile on his face
And quotes, "Oh how good, the plan fell into place"

 

Reviews

[Alisa_the_fluff_ball]

I like this, nice rhyme, and a well executed dark theme. However, the last line seems to interupt the flow for me a bit. Other than that, great job!

--Alisa_the_fluff_ball