Wild

and not angelic, for sure..I failed the test

untamed

 

not even by gravity
or the worst
of fate

 

though

 

the body wanes
and may soon wilt

 

the heart and mind
are in the spirit

 

untamed

Reviews

[FJ Davis]

Considering the body of your work, the many--often,quirky--areas of interest and your rather unique viewpoints, "Wild"--as a personal assessment--need not even have been written. After reading the poem, however, I'm truly elated that it was.
Quite possibly, you are therein specifically referring to something about yourself of which I am unaware, Still, I will stand by my statements regarding your obvious poetic vitality--as well as the great worth of this noble and courageous piece.

[Emily B]

oh, i love these words

[Wondering Mind]

Emily, the words are baptized by your love for them, and I am thankful to be a mere means :)