Carnal Dance

Some for some

what friend

where

 

would  dance away
the wanton
hours of this night

 

with me

 

that I may

sweat off

these heated
carnal fluids?

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

sounds like the person is backed up and needs to let it out. is in need of some friend with benefits or a one night stand.

[Helen Crutchett]

Well, what does one say to that I'm at a lost for words, although have a lot of thoughts spinning around in my head but not for publication! Very sensuous, well that's one thought! :)

[Wondering Mind]

I shall say no more!! Except thank you again :)

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Lmao at eating pineapple :))) Good poem, wandering

[Wondering Mind]

Thank you ma'am :)

[J. J. Nightingale]

Maybe they would have to be more than a friend .. .. I am sure you would not have to look very far for a willing soul ...lol ... Enjoy !

Jazz :)

[Wondering Mind]

Thank you Jazz :)

[Ed Hart]

i think you need to sweeten up the offer a little bit

[Wondering Mind]

lol…I suppose eating pineapple doesn’t count?

[Robbie~xoxo~]

The heated dance can be very passionate... sweating is great for the complexion, leaves a great afterglow. ;)

[Wondering Mind]

I'll have to make use of "afterglow" in some of my attempts at writing :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Looking forward to it....I may have to respond to that. ;)