Penny

penny for your thoughts

submissive nuance
batting bating eyes entice
he’s now “penny-less”

Author's Note

the (d)evil is in the details :)

Reviews

[Unspoken poet]

This is really good and to the point

[Wondering Mind]

Thank you!

[Hi]

Concise, well written and poignant. Thanks.

[Wondering Mind]

Thanks for the review. Senryu is a style I enjoy

[Papaya]

Nice double meaning there. I like it.

[Wondering Mind]

Thank you for taking time to read and for your comment. I'm glad you liked it.

[Papaya]

My pleasure.

[Mockingbird]

sounds like someone who sold his soul to the devil, whom i hear comes in many pleasing forms.

[Pax]

oh.... i think this situations is quite common now a days... clever wits!

[Renée]

Oh Dear..it happens! lol Senryu isn't this ?

[Shaken Not Stirred]

perhaps, unless the details were made to devil the Penny payer into giving away his secrets. :)

[Abhra]

This is an excellent Haiku. One of the best haiku's I have read in recent times. I especially like the alliteration with b's and e's. I also like the subtle suggestion for being penny-less. The object of desire could have been anything. Captures an event, perhaps tragicomic, in three lines. Thanks for sharing.

[Corset]

I really love this, a penny for your thoughts and he's paid for every one till he's now destitute, or without Penny either way it's a brilliant play on thought in three lines or less...amazing and so clever!

[Wondering Mind]

brevity is a handicap that I have found refuge in :)
Thanks for your kind words

[Corset]

my pleasure to read as always!

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And you can say so much in such little time :)

[Wondering Mind]

And you are very kind. Thank you :)

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Off to the lake all...have a beautiful 4th of july

[Wondering Mind]

enjoy...happy 4th to you, we had ours on the 1st :p