Earthquake

you never know when it may happen.

seismic waves
of basic instinct
shook these pillars
to the ground

 

friends once
became

 

man and woman

Reviews

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I disagree with frank and muse. It is possible for two friends to remain just friends. I have one of 22 years. I love him dearly but he is like family not frolic :) Anyway...dispite my disagreement, I liked your poem :)

[Mockingbird]

i suppose it's possible. in some cases improbable. for me it would be almost taboo and incestuous. although that in itself might turn some people on.

[Wondering Mind]

You always leave very interesting reviews, Mockingbird. Thank you for your interaction with the writing.

[Shaken Not Stirred]

It kinda makes me think of childhood sweethearts growing up and then noticing each other, greatness in just a few words.

[MOON]

Very clever write my friend.

[Muse]

laws of attraction...I have to agree with some of the comments below. I'm not sold on the thought that man and woman can be "just friends". It's almost nearly unavoidable...like an earthquake, it's just human nature that a pass will be made...it not sooner...it will be later.

[Tai Ryens]

I love the way relationships and earthquakes are connected; this is the first time I've seen it used in this way. Well done.

[My Fair Lady]

Ahhh the forces of nature. Simply wonderful.

[Corset]

Lol at Ed below me...bah..don't listen to him (smile, a friend once told me, women are evil) I wanna feel the earth move under my feet, ( thank you Carole King, lalalaa)...you are not truly living or growing unless you are loving. ( the good ,the bad and the ugly, imho. )

[Ed Hart]

earthquake
shake and bake
big mistake
break brake

[Robbie~xoxo~]

The waves can be strong...magnetic. An Earthquake is bound to happen. Great write.