Sand-Dance 2

on a summer night

I don’t know whether
it was the weather

 

the caressing breeze
      the moon smiling in her face

                        the lullaby of waves
                                  hushing the shore
  
was it

the drink or five

that
made things alive?

 

or maybe
drops of Jupiter
playing in the air

 

that

 

 

started our
sand-dance?

Reviews

[Shandra Sun]

Mysterious and playful. Things become alive whenever we stop the mind. I love your stacatto style, the rythm of your telling...

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I believe it was the drops of Jupiter...always magical. A lovely sand dance...Very romantic... (Sigh)

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I think it was the drink :)

[linear]

Beautifully done........sureal....... nothing more to add, just perfect.....

[Renée]

You have a way with the pen writing romantic pieces..I could read this 100 times..and still read again... " Train"

[Ed Hart]

here's a bit of fun about a bit of fun...oh the wonderful nights of sand-dance romance...you have given it such a lovely lilt...thank you

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

Oh that moon .. seems magical .. and we play beneath it's light, and dance to the notes in our minds ... Lovely

Jazz ..

[Mockingbird]

brings to mind a summer night on the beach resplendent of all the things that make the perfect ambience. there are many factors that may have started their sand-dance but perhaps the 'drink or five that made things alive,' enhanced their senses and made them lose their inhibitions and made the memory sweeter...what are 'drops of jupiter...' sounds like a cool name for a song.