A Pebble

or less

don’t over estimate

 

ripples

may mislead
on the surface

 

and

a pebble
too soon will sink
under-estimating

 

 

the gravity
of reality

Author's Note

too many pebbles sink to the bottom

Reviews

[Corset]

way too many pebbles, insightful write, I love this!

[_mal]

Wow, I want to quote the whole poem back at you and be like 'this, this bit is great' but that would be really stupid. Under-estimating the gravity of reality, I'll be thinking about that tonight