A Pebble

or less

don’t over estimate

 

ripples

may mislead
on the surface

 

and

a pebble
too soon will sink
under-estimating

 

 

the gravity
of reality

Author's Note

too many pebbles sink to the bottom

Reviews

[FJ Davis]

Ain't it the truth!
Metaphorical applications abound.
"...underestimating the gravity of reality."
Great!

[Mockingbird]

nothing is ever what it seems. perhaps the pebbles are our rationalizations of our choices and actions we make to ourselves but know ourselves we've made the wrong choices and they will come back to haunt us. very thought provoking because interpretation seems elusive to me. you know i always have to know about
everything, i'm that neurotic : )

[~LadyWolf~]

Life has it's battles that's for sure ~ We just have to stay strong and fight to stay alive.. very well done!

[Tai Ryens]

I agree with all the reviews below, this was cleverly done, and the ending was powerful. Well done.

[Pax]

wow, this is deep made me think. and a powerful ending. great write my friend.

[Renée]

I love skipping rocks on water..they always leave rings as they skip along..and they always sink..humm interesting ..is it about the pebble or the one who puts the pebble into action ?

[Tate Morgan]

Life always seems to exact its toll The truth is nature cares not who we are.It indiscriminately takes out aLL BUT THE STRONGEST

[MOON]

Pretty deep my friend indeed ripples can start the most meaningful changes the soft touch works and a hard throw just sinks.

[J. J. Nightingale]

True .. Good One ..

Jazz ;)

[Ed Hart]

ah, weiqui pebbles!