Sighs

in poetry

eyes danced

around

your rhyme

 

did you feel me?

 

that breeze

on the back

of your neck

a peck

sighs of my soul

at your beauty

Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

Stunning! Beautifully penned my friend!

[Renée]

Softly sighing @ the beauty of this piece..

[Ed Hart]

damn, i thought it was one of the chicks

[J. J. Nightingale]

Ahhh .. sweet ..

Softly Done .. Jazz

[Michael G.]

I like how you made this simple quiet poem feel. The softness of it gives the feeling of whispers almost heard.
Well written.

[patricia]

a poem doesnt get any better than this, it has all the elements...the personal loving touch that speak to each reader as if it is meant for them, and the sensuality...just enough to stroke a tired mind...then comes the sound in your use of the word sigh...leading us right to the source of your big old heart. loved it. enjoyed.

[Pax]

signs and chances. wonderful.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

What a lovely thought...the breeze was felt, and my soul sighs... This is mesmerizing piece.

[Arte]

I believed, she did because she felt it as well.